The Analysis of Seven Meaning by Geoffrey Leech in A Poetry
The Analysis of Seven Meaning by Geoffrey Leech in A Poetry My 20 Lines For My Broken Heart Godspower Oshodin The windows of my heart is shut and disdained, My memories in reminisce of how it was pained. The open shutter of love, is now closed Moments like before will never be tossed. Love has spanked my heart to pain, As I write this poem with no poetic gain. My hand can no longer touch your beautiful face, The one I love have given me a long space. My hands fidget, as I exhaust this cubic pen, That your love for me is no longer ten over ten. My eyes can’t stop cascading tear, cascade For wooing the next girl, is my lyrical fear.
I have stopped sleeping, because I don’t want to dream of you, Yet, staring at this blue sky, all I see is you. My dreams of fathering your children is dead My purple hibiscus has turned red. Steep is the road I now passes thru And yet, getting back to your heart is my only clue. My Journey with love has been cut shot, Now, all my feelings for a girl, has a “but”. Analysis: 1. First Stanza: The open shutter of love, is now closed, Synonym lists: Disdained : scorn, disregard, despise Reminisce : recall, recollect Pained Closed Tossed : acne, hurting, tenderness, griet : shut, lock, near, block : throw, let fly
At the first line of the first stanza above, “the windows of my heart” has connotative meaning “this feeling” if we relate it to the whole lines of the first stanza, and at the third line the words “the open shutter of love” also has connotation with “My heart”. All the lines in the first stanza have affective meaning which can be analyzed that the writer shows us of how hurt his feeling marked by the words “disdained” and “pained” which are in conceptual meaning the word “disdained” means “Refuse with contempt” and “pained” means “hurt or upset”.
Paraphrase This feeling is shut and despised, As I recall the memories of how it was hurt me. My heart is now closed, Because this old memories will never be thrown. 2. Second Stanza Spanked : smack, slap, hit, strike Poetic : lyrical, rhytmical : addition, increase, get, profit Gain The whole lines in the second stanza have affective meaning that the writer shows us the cause of the pain that the writer felt as he stated obviously at the third and fourth lines in the second stanza above which explain that the pain made him can not write the poem poetically.
This second stanza also has connotative meaning on the words “long space” in the fourth line expressing the writer had left by his beloved ne or it could be meant the writer had a parting with his beloved one. – Paraphrase: Love has slapped my heart to pain, As I write this poem without lyrical addition. My hand can’t touch your beautiful face again, You’re the one I love, the one who left me. 3.
Third Stanza My eyes can’t stop cascading tear, Fidget Exhaust Cascading : shaking, fiddle, be uneasy : tire out, weaken, use up, finish, wear out : flow, pour, fall, drop Woo Lyrical Fear : persuade, pursue : poetic, romantic, emotional : terror, fright, worry, anxiety, phobia All lines of the third stanza above contain the affective meaning which is about the ffect of the writer’s pain and it can be seen at the third and fourth lines of the third stanza above.
The second line at the third stanza above is obviously telling us that the writer is upset and disappointed with his woman because it seems like the woman’s love to the writer is not as much as the writer expected and it caused the writer crying and made a deep trauma of himself to try to start new relationship with another women because he did not want to feel those kinds of pain again. Meanwhile, in the fourth line if the third stanza above has a social meaning marked in words “for wooing the next girl”.
If we compare the word “wooing” based on conceptual meaning, “wooing” means “persuading or flirting someone to get attention”, but in social meaning, the word “wooing” has a different meaning that is “seeking the affection of a woman which is usually with the hope of marriage “. This shows us that the relationship of the writer and his woman almost reached the marriage as the writer wished. – Paraphrase: My hands are shaking when I use this pen, That your love for me is not as much as I expected. I can’t stop crying, And it’s frightened me to try to find another girls. . Fourth Stanza Synonym list: Dead : deceased, lifeless, boring, over, finished The fourth stanza still consists of affective meaning showed by the first and second lines of the fourth stanza above describing the effect of the parting which obviously tell us that the writer want to forget the woman even the writer is still haunted by the shadow of the woman. The third line of the fourth stanza above has thematic meaning. In this line, “My dreams of fathering your children is dead” the writer wanted to emphasize that “his dream” is dead or over.
The fourth line of the fourth stanza above has connotation meaning because in this line, “My purple hibiscus has urned red” n hidden meanings in the two key word “purple” and “red “. Based on sources and after combining with the whole lines of the fourth stanza, “purple” means imagination and dreams and “red” means anger (negative expression) here because the line has the opposite meaning between purple – which attached with the word hibiscus, kind of flowers – and red.
In the conceptual meaning, the word “Hibiscus” here is kind of flowers and tends to beautiful thing. So it can be concluded that the meaning of the fourth line is the writer’s beautiful dream (fathering the oman’s children) had become anger caused by the pain and the parting. I have stopped sleeping, because I don’t want to dream of you, Even if I look at the sky, all I can see is you. My dream to be a father of our children is over, My beautiful dream has become anger. 5.
Fifth Stanza Clue : sign, hint, evidence At the first line of the last stanza has a reflected meaning marked by “Steep is the road I now passes thru” while in the conceptual meaning steep described as a steep place as on a hill and if we relate it to the steep in the context of the first line here, teep could be meant as the writer’s life destruction or it could be the pain that he must face. The third line of the last stanza has a connotative meaning marked by “My journey with love has been cut shot”.
For the first highlight words, “My Journey with love” could be meant as the writer’s love life and “cut shot” here could be meant as broken or fall to pieces. But the whole lines at the last stanza have affective meaning that tells us about the condition of writer’s psychology that the only way or his only wish is back to the woman he loved or it could be the writer wanted to tell and give he woman sign in order to get her back and after all the pain he got, his feelings and his point of view ofa girl has a doubt.
Pain is the one that I must face now, But, back to your side is my only wish. My love life has fell to pieces, Now, all my feelings for a girl has a doubt. Conclusion: The outline of the whole meaning of this poem tend to affective meaning describing what the writer felt about love and how love can destruct his dream to be with his beloved one as long as ne wanted, now the happiness becomes pain and miserable the parting with the beloved one is. now